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On 5-26-2011, I was honored with a Daily Literature Deviation for this piece of poetry. It is featured here news.deviantart.com/article/15… amongst other beautiful pieces of literary works of art.

Thank you very much to admins at :icondailylitdeviations: and to :iconapple-dark: for featuring this piece. I am so very grateful.

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Published by Revolt Daily revoltdaily.org/poetry-sarah-h… along with some of my other poems on July 12, 2012.

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Zaphod-Beeblebrox58 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Like the last stanza a lot, it draws all of your thoughts together and remains vague enough to be thought provoking.

Is the color imagery intentional?
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SarahHartmanArt Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Thank you for the comment.   And yes, the color imagery is intentional.  I hate pink. :)
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Zaphod-Beeblebrox58 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
I thought there was a link between the pink panties and the blood on the tile... ;)
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SarahHartmanArt Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
It really can mean whatever you see it as meaning.  The meaning lies in the minds of the readers, despite what I intend when I write it. :)  I think that's the beauty of poetry.
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Zaphod-Beeblebrox58 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Well, that is the coolest part of writing..
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SarahHartmanArt Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Absolutely.
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that last stanza was just awesome.
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SarahHartmanArt Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Thank you. :) I'm getting it tattooed on my side with a feather quill pen. :)

Thanks for faving it. :hug:
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice!!

i'm getting (eventually) un phoenix on my side
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SarahHartmanArt Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Awesome!
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